Revised Poem. "I Still Wonder"

I Still Wonder….Revised
By: Tim Brown

Some days I wonder
I wonder, Should I give up,
Did I blunder?
Have I done enough, I wonder
Just wonder, Should I put it all under?

When I’m on stage, the adrenaline rushes through me,
Like a blistering wind on a cold winter day.
I work my hardest to fill my dreams,
But what am I missing, to be on my way?

Time never waits for me, time won’t wait for me
Why won’t it wait for me, time never waits for me
Time won’t wait for me, why won’t it wait for me

Some days I wonder
I wonder, Should I give up,
Did I blunder?
Have I done enough, I wonder
Just wonder, Should I put it all under?

I want to see my name on signs,
Reflecting off the metallic blue steal guitar.
A sea of people, surrounding me around the stage.
An ocean of nameless eyes, I can sparkle in their eyes
They’re up one by one, I’m watching people rise.

Time never waits for me, time won’t wait for me
Why won’t it wait for me, time never waits for me
Time won’t wait for me, why won’t it wait for me

I want to make it big, and have a good life,
See my dreams come true,
Have a family and a wife
But I still wonder, I still wonder…